Teacher's comments: A very well told story-that the reader shares with you! 19/20 "Crash" The sky was as clear as a calm sea, not a trace of disturbance in the distance. It was a beautiful day to be outside. "Hey kids! Grab your bikes and let's go for a ride!" shouted my father from his workshop in the backyard. We raced to our bikes, grinning ear to ear. The anticipation was so powerful, I felt like …showed first 75 words of 729 total…

…showed last 75 words of 729 total…They would tease me and call me "Crash." It was not until later, when I questioned my mother about that time of my life. She told me of how the doctor's misdiagnosis sent me home with a 3½-inch skull fracture. It was not until two days later that we found this out. I could tell that it brought up many memories for her. I wish I only could remember it for myself.